I make no claims
of brilliance or elegance
only of white walls
and handmade furniture
of lavenders blooming
and roses climbing
outside my window,
even in winter
I know of tadpoles and lizards,
snakes and crayfish
of flint rocks and red clay
passion fruit and sumac berries.
I have tasted sand,
caressed hawk feathers
and scarred my knuckles
while building barbed wire fences
I walked the halls of academia,
succeeded, so they tell me,
because of my memory
and ability to read people
but somehow I have failed
to understand the appeal
of leather cases, concrete,
high heel shoes
and gray wool skirts.
I have felt this and wondered why. You have painted a poem that many can identify with. When I traded my flannel shirts for brooks brothers–I traded more that I knew.
Check out my latest–Sometimes the Mist of the Mountains.
Scot
By: scot on November 26, 2007
at 2:36 am
Scot,
Thanks.
I saw your wonderful poem over on the bridge and have left a comment for you, but let me say again that it is completely awesome. I’d recommend it to anyone and your site as well!
Nochipa
By: nochipa on November 27, 2007
at 2:36 am
Thanks so much–I have linked your site on mine. You my friend are the awesome one –I am a fan…your voice and style are fresh as…
By: scot on November 27, 2007
at 3:33 am
Thank you, Scot.
Nochipa
By: nochipa on December 2, 2007
at 3:33 am
Loved this one too. again i felt linked with the poem..You have a way of touching hearts of every day people….i too hate wool skirts, never wore high heals …
loved my vist to your poetry…beautiful work..
By: connetta on December 2, 2007
at 11:29 pm